Phân tích"Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge. Others think that they should only study a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 17/12/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge. Others think that they should only study a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 16/12/2022)

• Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge. Others think that they should only study a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge. 
    • Main idea 1: General education across a range of subjects is likely to develop the comprehensive thinking of children. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý phân biệt "unlike, unlikely, alike, likely & like" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: they seem to be too young to decide on a specific occupation to follow at that age.
      • Example: secondary schools in the UK aim to teach children different subjects ranging from math to arts, and their educational philosophy is to put job orientation in the high school curriculum.
    • Main idea 2: Those who learn a range of subjects in secondary school can be more capable and competitive once they enter the highly competitive workplace. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: If students have access to a wide diversity of subjects in middle school and high school, they can become quite knowledgeable) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "knowledgeable" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Our society is advancing at such an unprecedented pace that many professions that prevail today are forecast to vanish in the near future >> That poses a multitude of challenges to the younger generation who will survive only if they are equipped with a wealth of knowledge in a variety of domains. 
        • Learning multiple principles from science to languages helps them gain substantial amounts of information, thus facilitating the acquisition of knowledge in various areas >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"learn"tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm  Others think that they should only study a small number of subjects in details & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Being exposed to expertise and skills required by a certain speciality at the young age, the students would stand a great chance to not only have a well-defined career path but also become competent workers in their later life.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng động từ "focus" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Early exposure allows students to start developing essential skills and knowledge related to a specific field from a young age. 
        • This gives them a head start in acquiring specialized skills and expertise.
      • Example: For example, with students having ambition to work as translators or applied language researchers in the future, it is a course of basic grammar and vocabulary at their secondary school that can realise the dream.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"ambition"tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Current society of specialization tends to favour employees with a good grounding in a single field over those who have general knowledge but are not experts in a particular area  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "favour" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It is absurd to say that such career-driven programmes are not appropriate to today's world.
      • Example: In the tech industry, for example, employers often look for candidates with specific skills and experience in areas such as software development, data science, and machine learning. Candidates with a general understanding of technology may have difficulty finding jobs in this industry, even if they have strong problem-solving and analytical skills.

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