Phân tích"Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 19/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that. the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm số 1. Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people. 
    • Main idea: Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Museums are widely considered as important tourist attractions of any cities or countries)
      • Supporting idea:  The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "average"
      • Example: The Louvre Museum in Paris, France, strikes a balance between enjoyment and education, strategically presenting its extensive collection to cater to both casual visitors and art enthusiasts. Through interactive exhibits and thematic displays, the emphasis on an enjoyable experience ensures a diverse range of visitors can appreciate the museum's treasures, contributing to the Louvre's status as a global tourist destination, attracting millions of visitors annually.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm the purpose of museums is to educate & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know.
      • Supporting idea:  Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "WHILE" TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: The British Museum in London exemplifies a commitment to educating visitors through innovation, utilizing multimedia guides to enhance the learning experience. These handheld devices provide detailed commentary about exhibitions, offering insightful information that enables visitors to delve deeper into the historical and cultural significance of artifacts.
    • Main idea 2: The main purpose of museums is to educate people as they exhibit collections of interesting objects that hold great cultural or historical values.
      • Supporting idea: Museums often employ interpretive displays, interactive exhibits, and educational programs to provide context and information about the exhibited objects, fostering a deeper understanding of their cultural and historical significance.
      • Example: Museums such as War Remnants Museum, Vietnam Museum of Ethnology or Vietnamese Women's Museum are regarded as a vital educational resource because of their collection , storage, preservation and display of the material, photographs, artifacts on the evidence of the crime and the consequences of the war that the invasion force has caused to Vietnam. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Museums play a significant role in society, sparking debate over whether their primary function is to entertain or to educate. Some argue that museums should be enjoyable spaces that entertain visitors, while others believe their main purpose is to educate. This essay will discuss both perspectives and provide reasons why I support the latter view.

On one hand, many people consider museums as tourist attractions designed to entertain. These institutions aim to showcase a collection of intriguing objects that will draw a large audience. For the average visitor, an emphasis on enjoyment is crucial as extensive educational content can be overwhelming and may lead to boredom. For example, the Louvre Museum in Paris, France, strikes a balance between enjoyment and education. It presents its vast collection through interactive exhibits and thematic displays, ensuring that both casual visitors and art enthusiasts find the experience engaging. This approach contributes to the Louvre's status as a premier global tourist destination, attracting millions of visitors each year.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

On the other hand, I do believe that the primary objective of museums should be to educate visitors. Exhibitions are meant to teach something new, enriching visitors' knowledge and understanding. Many museums employ professional guides or provide headsets with detailed commentary to enhance the educational experience. The British Museum in London exemplifies this commitment by using multimedia guides to offer in-depth information about exhibits, helping visitors grasp the historical and cultural significance of the artifacts. Similarly, museums like the War Remnants Museum in Vietnam and the Vietnamese Women's Museum focus on educating the public through their extensive collections, which illustrate the cultural and historical impact of significant events. These museums use interpretive displays and interactive exhibits to provide context, fostering a deeper understanding of their collections.

In conclusion, while museums can serve as enjoyable attractions, I am of the opinion that their fundamental purpose is to educate.

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