Phân tích"Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 07/12/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 07/12/2023)

Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources.
    • Main idea 1: They provide access to physical copies of books and other materials that may not be available online >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Libraries often house a diverse collection of books, including rare or out-of-print editions, special collections, and historical documents. 
        • Many of these materials may not be readily available online, and physical copies in libraries allow patrons to access a broader range of resources.
      • Example: For instance, the British Library houses original Shakespeare manuscripts and Gutenberg Bibles, accessible only through physical visits.
    • Main idea 2: They also offer a quiet and peaceful environment for studying and research, which can be difficult to find in a noisy and distracting world. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Libraries are designed to be quiet spaces, conducive to focused concentration. 
        • This environment minimizes external distractions, allowing individuals to immerse themselves in their studies or research without the disruptions commonly found in more public spaces.
      • Example: Many libraries have dedicated reading rooms with soundproofed walls and limited distractions, ideal for focused reading and studying. Students preparing for exams, researchers delving into complex topics, or anyone seeking a moment of quiet contemplation can find solace in these spaces.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Many people think that libraries are essential for society. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Most information is now available online, and that digital resources are often more up-to-date and easier to access than physical copies of books >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "information" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Digital resources can be updated in real-time, allowing for immediate dissemination of the latest information. 
        • This is particularly crucial in fast-evolving fields such as technology, science, and current events, where information becomes outdated quickly. 
        • Unlike printed materials, digital content can be revised and updated continuously.
      • Example: Wikipedia is a prime example of how digital resources provide up-to-date information in real-time. As an online encyclopedia, Wikipedia allows users to access a vast array of information across various topics. The platform's collaborative nature enables contributors worldwide to update and edit content instantaneously.
    • Main idea 2: They also argue that libraries are expensive to maintain, and that the money and resources spent on libraries could be better used in other areas such as education and healthcare.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Libraries require substantial infrastructure, including buildings, utilities, and maintenance. 
        • Constructing and maintaining these physical structures can incur significant expenses, especially in urban areas where real estate costs are high
      • Example: For example, the construction of the new Stavros Niarchos Foundation Library in Athens, Greece, cost approximately €250 million.

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