🔥Phân tích "Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 12/10/2023) - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm some people think it is bad
    • Main idea 1:  the process of preparing for these events is often demanding
      • Supporting idea: 
        • the host country’s government tends to embark on infrastructure splurge, which takes a toll on national funding, especially in developing countries.
        • The government’s desire to build edifices such as big arenas or racing circuits can incur a huge amount of debts, putting the country in economic difficulties afterwards. 
        • Therefore, spending lavishly on a short-lived event can be a dubious strategy. 
      • Example: For the World Cup 2014, it took Brazil five years to revitalise its cities and construct various facilities including stadiums and indoor athletics arenas to meet the world-class standard set by FIFA. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "construct" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Since a lot of people will be visiting the country during such events, untoward incidents like terror attacks could happen >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "happen" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: records have shown that there is a twofold increase in crimes such as prostitution and petty theft when a country organises an event such as the World Cup or the Olympics.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm hosting an international sports event is good for the country & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: international sporting games can potentially stimulate the tourism sector
      • Supporting idea: it is a great chance for the host nations to promote their culture on a global stage.
      • Example: For example, since the pictures of beautifully garnished Vietnamese dishes made headlines during the SEA Games in 2003, Vietnam has been branded as the “Kitchen of the world” and a must visit destination for global food lovers.
    • Main idea 2: International sports events are ideal occasions for hosting countries to enhance their dignity >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh & tính từ "ideal" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It can be conceded that major events are likely to draw global attention to the hosting nations which is a golden prospect for them to promote cultures and traditions. 
      • Example: A prime example is Beijing, the capital of China, which successfully took advantage of the 2008 Olympics to acquire a high reputation.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some individuals argue that hosting an international sporting event brings more harm than good to the host nation, while others believe such occasions are beneficial. I will discuss both viewpoints before expressing my firm support for the latter perspective.

On one hand, critics of these high-profile occasions (English: important and widely publicized events – Vietnamese: những sự kiện nổi bật, được truyền thông rộng rãi) claim that the preparatory phase (English: the time spent making necessary arrangements – Vietnamese: giai đoạn chuẩn bị) is often financially draining (English: costing a lot of money – Vietnamese: tốn kém tài chính). Governments may embark on infrastructure splurges (English: large, extravagant spending on construction – Vietnamese: chi tiêu mạnh tay vào cơ sở hạ tầng), which can strain public budgets (English: create pressure on government spending – Vietnamese: gây áp lực lên ngân sách nhà nước), especially in developing countries. For instance, in preparation for the 2014 FIFA World Cup, Brazil invested heavily in stadiums and transport systems, leaving the country with mounting debt (English: increasing financial obligations – Vietnamese: khoản nợ ngày càng tăng). Moreover, the influx of international tourists during such events may increase the risk of security breaches (English: incidents that threaten public safety – Vietnamese: vi phạm an ninh). There is often a surge in crime rates, including petty theft and prostitution, as seen in previous Olympics and World Cups.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, I strongly believe that the long-term merits (English: lasting benefits – Vietnamese: lợi ích lâu dài) of hosting international sports events far outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly, these events serve as powerful tourism catalysts (English: factors that trigger tourism growth – Vietnamese: chất xúc tác mạnh mẽ cho ngành du lịch), enabling countries to present their culture and hospitality on a global platform. For example, Vietnam earned the title "Kitchen of the World" following the successful hosting of the 2003 SEA Games, which showcased its culinary excellence (English: superior quality of cuisine – Vietnamese: ẩm thực tuyệt vời). Secondly, such events offer an unparalleled opportunity (English: chance that is better than any other – Vietnamese: cơ hội không gì sánh bằng) for national branding and reputation building. China, for instance, elevated its global image by hosting the 2008 Beijing Olympics, gaining international respect and recognition.

In conclusion, although hosting international sports competitions may pose certain economic and security risks, I believe the cultural prestige (English: enhanced respect and reputation related to culture – Vietnamese: uy tín văn hoá) and economic benefits they bring make them an advantageous investment for any nation.

Vocabulary Example (from Essay)

• “Brazil invested heavily in stadiums and transport systems, leaving the country with mounting debt.”

Synonyms (italicized):

• growing liabilities

• increasing financial burden

• ballooning expenses

Antonyms (italicized):

• budget surplus

• financial ease

• cost-saving strategy

Grammar Structures Used & Translated into Vietnamese

1. Relative Clause:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "For example, Vietnam earned the title 'Kitchen of the World' following the successful hosting of the 2003 SEA Games, which showcased its culinary excellence."
     → "Ví dụ, Việt Nam đã giành được danh hiệu 'Bếp ăn của thế giới' sau kỳ SEA Games 2003 thành công, sự kiện đã thể hiện ẩm thực tuyệt vời của đất nước này."

2. Cleft Sentence for Emphasis:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ"It can be conceded that major events are likely to draw global attention..."
     → "Có thể thừa nhận rằng các sự kiện lớn có khả năng thu hút sự chú ý toàn cầu..."

3. Passive Voice:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ"Such events are beneficial."
     → "Những sự kiện như vậy có lợi."

4. Compound adjectives:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "high-profile occasions", "financially draining investments", "long-term merits", "unparalleled opportunity"

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