Phân tích "Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 12/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm some people think it is bad
    • Main idea 1:  the process of preparing for these events is often demanding
      • Supporting idea: 
        • the host country’s government tends to embark on infrastructure splurge, which takes a toll on national funding, especially in developing countries.
        • The government’s desire to build edifices such as big arenas or racing circuits can incur a huge amount of debts, putting the country in economic difficulties afterwards. 
        • Therefore, spending lavishly on a short-lived event can be a dubious strategy. 
      • Example: For the World Cup 2014, it took Brazil five years to revitalise its cities and construct various facilities including stadiums and indoor athletics arenas to meet the world-class standard set by FIFA. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "construct" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Since a lot of people will be visiting the country during such events, untoward incidents like terror attacks could happen >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "happen" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: records have shown that there is a twofold increase in crimes such as prostitution and petty theft when a country organises an event such as the World Cup or the Olympics.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm hosting an international sports event is good for the country & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: international sporting games can potentially stimulate the tourism sector
      • Supporting idea: it is a great chance for the host nations to promote their culture on a global stage.
      • Example: For example, since the pictures of beautifully garnished Vietnamese dishes made headlines during the SEA Games in 2003, Vietnam has been branded as the “Kitchen of the world” and a must visit destination for global food lovers.
    • Main idea 2: International sports events are ideal occasions for hosting countries to enhance their dignity >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh & tính từ "ideal" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It can be conceded that major events are likely to draw global attention to the hosting nations which is a golden prospect for them to promote cultures and traditions. 
      • Example: A prime example is Beijing, the capital of China, which successfully took advantage of the 2008 Olympics to acquire a high reputation.

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