Phân tích"Some people think that governments should provide assistance for artists of all kinds. Others think this wastes money. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 16/9/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that governments should provide assistance for artists of all kinds. Others think this wastes money. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 16/9/2023)

Some people think that governments should provide assistance for artists of all kinds. Others think this wastes money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others think this wastes money. 
    • Main idea 1: The government operates with limited financial resources that should be allocated judiciously to address critical areas such as healthcare, education, and infrastructure development. 
      • Example: For example, imagine a scenario where a government is facing a shortage of healthcare facilities and medical professionals, resulting in long waiting times and inadequate access to healthcare services for its citizens. In such a situation, it would be more prudent to allocate additional resources to improve the healthcare system, hire more doctors, and enhance medical infrastructure, rather than directing funds towards supporting artists. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Funding the arts, while undoubtedly important for cultural enrichment, cannot take precedence over these fundamental necessities. 
        • Limited resources should be channeled towards areas that directly impact the welfare and well-being of the general population. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của từ "well-being" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Artists, like individuals in any profession, should bear the responsibility of ensuring their own financial sustainability. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Encouraging self-reliance fosters a sense of entrepreneurship and accountability, pushing artists to explore diverse avenues to support their craft. 
        • Relying on government handouts undermines the value of personal effort and resilience, ultimately hindering the growth and development of artists as independent creators.
      • Example: For example, self-employed artists are responsible for promoting and selling their artwork, participating in exhibitions, and engaging with potential buyers through various channels such as online platforms, galleries, and commissions.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that governments should provide assistance for artists of all kinds.  & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Supporting artists contributes to the enrichment of a country's cultural heritage. 
      • Supporting idea: Artistic expression reflects a society's values, history, and diversity, making it essential to preserve and nurture.
      • Example: The Harlem Renaissance, a vibrant period of cultural innovation in Harlem, New York City during the 1920s and 1930s, was a pivotal moment in African American history, where artists and intellectuals celebrated their culture, history, and identity while influencing broader American society.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

    • Main idea 2: The arts industry is a significant contributor to a nation's economy. 
      • Supporting idea: Government assistance can lead to the creation of jobs, the growth of the creative sector, and increased tourism through cultural events and attractions.
      • Example: The arts and cultural sector, with its $918.7 billion economic contribution in 2020, not only employed 5.1 million workers but also generated $76.1 billion in state and local tax revenue, highlighting its vital role in the U.S. economy by fostering employment and supporting related industries like tourism and hospitality.

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