Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources.
- Main idea 1: Governments have limited resources, and allocating public funds to the arts may divert resources from other essential services, such as healthcare and education.
- Supporting idea:
- The allocation of public funds is a complex process that involves prioritizing among various competing needs and demands.
- Governments must balance the requirements of different sectors to meet the needs of their citizens effectively.
- Example: The government of Singapore has a policy of allocating a certain percentage of its budget to the arts. However, in recent years, there has been debate about whether this money should be diverted to other essential services, such as healthcare and education.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Artists should rely on the market to sustain their creative pursuits.
- Supporting idea: Selling artwork, securing sponsorships, or crowdfunding can provide sustainable income for artists.
- Example: Jeff Koons, an American artist known for his sculptures of everyday objects like balloon animals and vacuum cleaners, produces controversial yet highly sought-after work, exemplified by the sale of his sculpture 'Balloon Dog (Orange)' for $58.4 million in 2019, making it the most expensive artwork ever sold at auction>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Main idea 1: Governments have limited resources, and allocating public funds to the arts may divert resources from other essential services, such as healthcare and education.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: Governments have a responsibility to promote and preserve their cultural heritage.
- Supporting idea: Supporting artists helps maintain and enrich the cultural identity of a nation.
- Example: The government of Egypt has a long history of promoting and preserving its cultural heritage. This includes the preservation of ancient monuments, such as the pyramids and the Sphinx, as well as the promotion of traditional arts and crafts.
- Main idea 2: Government funding can make art more accessible to the general public.
- Supporting idea: Museums, galleries, and cultural events supported by public funds often offer free or affordable access to the arts.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
- Example: The National Endowment for the Arts (NEA) is a United States government agency that provides funding for the arts, supporting a range of arts organizations, including museums, theaters, and orchestras, as well as offering artist fellowships and other programs to support individual artists.
- Main idea 1: Governments have a responsibility to promote and preserve their cultural heritage.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The discussion regarding whether creative artists like painters and musicians should receive financial backing from governments or alternative sources is highly debated. I hold the view that government funding is essential for preserving cultural heritage and ensuring that art is accessible to everyone.
On one hand, proponents of funding from alternative sources argue that governments have limited resources, and allocating public funds to the arts may divert resources from essential services like healthcare and education. The allocation of public funds is a complex process that involves balancing the needs of various sectors to effectively serve citizens. For instance, in Singapore, the government allocates a certain percentage of its budget to the arts. However, this has sparked debate over whether these funds should instead support critical services like healthcare and education. Additionally, relying on the market can sustain artists' creative pursuits. Artists can generate income through selling artwork, securing sponsorships, or crowdfunding. Jeff Koons, an American artist known for his sculptures, exemplifies this model, as his piece 'Balloon Dog (Orange)' sold for $58.4 million in 2019, highlighting the potential for artists to thrive independently.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
On the other hand, supporters of government funding, myself included, argue that it is essential for promoting and preserving cultural heritage. By supporting artists, governments help maintain and enrich the cultural identity of a nation. Egypt, for example, has a history of promoting its cultural heritage through the preservation of ancient monuments and the promotion of traditional arts and crafts. Furthermore, government funding can make art more accessible to the public. Museums, galleries, and cultural events supported by public funds often offer free or affordable access to the arts. The National Endowment for the Arts (NEA) in the United States exemplifies this, as it funds a range of arts organizations and supports individual artists through fellowships and programs.
In conclusion, while alternative sources of funding for artists have their merits, I believe government support is crucial for preserving cultural heritage and making art accessible to all.
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