Phân tích "Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live, while others believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 5/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live, while others believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live, while others believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion?

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm “Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live”
    • Main idea 1: Governments have a responsibility to intervene in these cases in order to protect the public good. 
      • Supporting idea: Individuals often make poor choices that can have negative consequences for themselves and for society as a whole. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: 
        • For example, individuals may choose to smoke cigarettes, even though they know that smoking is harmful to their health. 
        • They may also choose to drive drunk, even though they know that it is dangerous. 
        • Implementing laws related to seatbelt usage, smoking bans in public places, or mandatory vaccinations can contribute to the overall health and safety of the population.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm “others believe they should choose the way themselves” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: It is important to respect individual freedom and autonomy. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They believe that individuals should be free to make their own choices, even if those choices are not always wise. 
    • Main idea 2: When people have the freedom to choose their own paths, they are more likely to pursue endeavors that genuinely resonate with their passions and talents. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This can result in a workforce and society that is both more productive and fulfilled. 
      • Example: For example, if individuals are free to choose their careers based on their interests and strengths, they are more likely to excel in their chosen fields, contributing positively to their own lives as well as the broader economy.

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