Phân tích"Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: Share responsibilities with state-owned healthcare institutions in taking care of the public’s health >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ và danh từ "share" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • reduce the pressure on state-owned healthcare institutions in terms of overload of patients and finance >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng IN TERMS OF trong tiếng anh 
        • insufficient facilities and professional capability in state hospital
      • Example:Singapore's compulsory Medisave scheme, funded by both workers and employers, alleviates pressure on public healthcare by reducing reliance on state-owned hospitals, lessening the government's financial burden, and enhancing the overall quality of healthcare, complemented by investments in primary healthcare services.

    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: those who choose to pay for private healthcare services will experience many benefits  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Patients have greater choices in medical services)
      • Supporting idea:
        • since private medical establishments are not limited by national budget, there is more access to advanced treatment and modern technology >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "treatment" tiếng anh
        • Benefits: 
          • the quality and speed of treatments >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "quality"
          • short waiting times for appointments and operations
          • more private and comfortable facilities.
      • Example: In the United States, private healthcare is the primary source of healthcare for most Americans. Private healthcare services are provided by a variety of healthcare providers, including hospitals, clinics, and doctors' offices.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Good health is universally valued, leading some to argue that medical services should not be driven by profit-making motives. In my opinion, despite reservations regarding profit-driven healthcare, the benefits of private medical services in distributing public healthcare responsibilities and offering advanced treatment options surpass any potential disadvantages.

One compelling reason why private healthcare can be advantageous is its ability to share the burden with state-run healthcare systems. By alleviating pressure on public hospitals in terms of patient overload and financial strain, private facilities complement state efforts to deliver quality healthcare. For instance, Singapore's Medisave scheme, jointly funded by workers and employers, has reduced reliance on state hospitals, thereby enhancing healthcare quality through investments in primary services.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Furthermore, private healthcare offers significant benefits to those who can afford it. Patients often enjoy greater access to advanced treatments and modern technology, unhindered by national budget constraints. This results in superior treatment quality and efficiency, evidenced by shorter waiting times and more comfortable facilities. In the United States, private healthcare dominates, providing diverse medical services across hospitals, clinics, and private practices.

In conclusion, despite concerns about profit-driven healthcare, the advantages of private medical services in sharing public healthcare responsibilities and providing superior treatment options outweigh the potential drawbacks. Governments should consider leveraging private sector efficiency to enhance overall healthcare accessibility and quality.

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