Phân tích"Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 27.11.2022 & 21/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ”children should begin their formal education at  a very early age”.
    • Main idea 1:  the younger an individual is, the easier it is for them to acquire new knowledge and information >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • these children would have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education
        • scientific research has illustrated that language acquisition ability is greater at a younger age than at an older one; therefore, an increasing figure for parents would like their children to be exposed to foreign languages sooner >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
      • Example: Consider the Montessori educational method, prioritizing self-directed learning and exploration in early childhood through carefully designed classrooms, where studies indicate that attending Montessori schools correlates with enhanced language development, mathematics proficiency, and critical thinking skills compared to peers.

    • Main idea 2: attending schools earlier offers children opportunities to discover their talents or interests. 
      • Supporting idea: This means that they can build a stronger foundation in subjects they are good at or interested at an early age instead of waiting until age seven >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn DIỄN ĐẠT "GIỎI LÀM VIỆC GÌ" (good at sth) TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: Take the case of Finland, renowned for its innovative education system, where children start compulsory pre-primary education at five, emphasizing play-based learning and exploration to foster the discovery of strengths and interests in a relaxed and supportive environment.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm ”they should begin at at least 7 years old” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1:  it might also be more beneficial for children to have a childhood in which they can cultivate their own skills and interests through normal activities at home >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "CHILDHOOD" IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: Home environments provide a more personalized setting where children can explore topics of personal interest at their own pace, fostering a love for learning.
      • Example: Take the heartwarming story of Kenadi Alexander, a young girl from Texas who became a coding prodigy through self-directed learning at home, starting to code at the age of five in a supportive environment that encouraged her passion without formal classes.
    • Main idea 2: commencing school at a later age will offer kids more time to learn many things via their parents at home >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "kid" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Word form của "integrate"
      • Example: Consider the Waldorf education movement, a global educational philosophy emphasizing experiential learning and creativity, where schools delay formal academic instruction until age seven and prioritize play-based learning and artistic expression. 

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