Phân tích"Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 24/06/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 24/06/2023)

Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others disagree 
    • Main idea: Children should be empowered to think critically, make their own choices, and seek guidance from various sources to navigate the complexities of life. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "navigate" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Open communication and a supportive environment that fosters personal growth are key elements in shaping responsible decision-making in children.
      • Example: 
        • A child who feels comfortable talking to their parents about their plans for the future is more likely to make decisions that are in line with their goals.
        • A child who feels supported by their parents when they make mistakes is more likely to learn from their mistakes and to make better decisions in the future. >> IELTS TUTOR Diễn đạt"yếu tố tương lai"tiếng anh (Paraphrase"in the future")
        • A child who feels like their parents are there to help them through difficult times is more likely to make responsible decisions when they are faced with challenges.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea: Parents have a deep emotional investment in their children's success and genuinely care about their best interests. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They have a comprehensive understanding of their children's strengths, weaknesses, and individual needs. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Cách dùng từ "understanding" tiếng anh 
        • By following their parents' advice, children can benefit from the accumulated wisdom, values, and cultural heritage passed down through generations.  
      • Example: 
        • For example, a parent might advise their child to save money for a rainy day, or to invest in their education. This advice can help children make better financial decisions and avoid making costly mistakes.
        • For example, a parent might advise their child to be honest and communicate openly in their relationships, or to be patient and understanding. This advice can help children build strong and lasting relationships.

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