Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm the subject of international news should be taught in secondary school
- Main idea 1: In an increasingly interconnected world, understanding international events is crucial.
- Supporting idea:
- It helps students develop a global perspective, fostering awareness of different cultures, political systems, and global issues such as climate change, international conflicts, and economic trends.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
- Global awareness can also cultivate empathy and reduce prejudices, as students learn about the challenges and triumphs of people in other countries.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: As future global citizens, students should be informed about the world beyond their borders.
- Supporting idea: Knowledge of international affairs prepares them to participate in discussions and make informed decisions about issues that may affect their future.
- Example: For instance, a 2022 study published by the Centre for Climate Change Education found that students who participated in educational programs focused on international climate cooperation were more likely to take action to reduce their own carbon footprint and support environmentally friendly policies in their local communities.
- Main idea 1: In an increasingly interconnected world, understanding international events is crucial.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm the subject of international news should be taught in secondary school
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm it is a waste of valuable school time & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: The secondary school curriculum is already packed with essential subjects.
- Supporting idea:
- Adding international news might lead to an overload, making it difficult for students to manage their studies effectively.
- Prioritizing international news might detract from the time allocated to fundamental subjects like math, science, and language arts, which are crucial for foundational learning and career readiness.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Some argue that international news might not be immediately relevant to the daily lives of students.
- Supporting idea:
- Focusing on local and national issues might be more pertinent and engaging, helping students understand their immediate environment better.
- Interest in international news can be highly variable; some students might find it difficult to relate to or engage with topics that seem distant or abstract.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: The secondary school curriculum is already packed with essential subjects.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm it is a waste of valuable school time & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
In today's globalized world, there is a debate about whether international news should be taught in secondary schools. While some argue that it is essential for developing informed global citizens, others believe it detracts from more critical subjects. I agree with the latter view.
Proponents of teaching international news in secondary schools argue that in an increasingly interconnected world, understanding global events is crucial. This knowledge helps students develop a global perspective, fostering awareness of different cultures, political systems, and global issues such as climate change, international conflicts, and economic trends. This global awareness can also cultivate empathy and reduce prejudices, as students learn about the challenges and triumphs of people in other countries. Additionally, as future global citizens, students should be informed about the world beyond their borders. Knowledge of international affairs prepares them to participate in discussions and make informed decisions about issues that may affect their future. For instance, a 2022 study published by the Centre for Climate Change Education found that students who participated in educational programs focused on international climate cooperation were more likely to take action to reduce their own carbon footprint and support environmentally friendly policies in their local communities.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
On the other hand, some, myself included, believe that incorporating international news into the secondary school curriculum is a waste of valuable school time. The secondary school curriculum is already packed with essential subjects, and adding international news might lead to an overload, making it difficult for students to manage their studies effectively. Prioritizing international news could detract from the time allocated to fundamental subjects like math, science, and language arts, which are crucial for foundational learning and career readiness. Furthermore, some argue that international news might not be immediately relevant to the daily lives of students. Focusing on local and national issues might be more pertinent and engaging, helping students understand their immediate environment better. Interest in international news can be highly variable; some students might find it difficult to relate to or engage with topics that seem distant or abstract.
In conclusion, while teaching international news in secondary schools can enhance global awareness and prepare students for future challenges, the potential overload and lack of immediate relevance make it a less practical addition to an already full curriculum.
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