Phân tích"Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that it depends on other factors
    • Main idea: Advocates of this perspective emphasize the importance of relationships, mental and physical health, and a sense of purpose or fulfillment in life. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They argue that even individuals with substantial wealth may experience unhappiness if they lack meaningful connections, suffer from health issues, or feel unfulfilled in their personal or professional lives. 
        • This viewpoint highlights the multifaceted nature of happiness, suggesting that it is influenced by a combination of emotional, social, and psychological factors.
      • Example: Despite financial success, celebrities and wealthy individuals often face depression, substance abuse, and personal struggles, revealing the inadequacy of wealth in ensuring happiness. The burdens of fame, hectic schedules, and a lack of authentic connections can lead to significant personal challenges, underscoring the complexity of achieving contentment beyond material prosperity.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Financial stability provides individuals with the means to fulfill basic needs and pursue a comfortable lifestyle.
      • Supporting idea: Having a secure income allows for access to healthcare, education, and a higher quality of life, contributing significantly to overall well-being. 
      • Example: Financial stability allows individuals to afford regular medical checkups, preventative care, and treatment for illnesses. This improves overall health outcomes, reduces stress associated with medical bills, and promotes a sense of security and well-being.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
    • Main idea 2: Economic success can provide opportunities for leisure, travel, and experiences that enhance happiness.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Leisure activities, such as hobbies or recreational pursuits, can provide a source of relaxation and enjoyment. 
        • Travel allows individuals to explore new cultures, broaden their perspectives, and create lasting memories. 
      • Example: For example, an artist might use saved income to travel to Paris to study the works of the Impressionists, enriching their artistic practice and understanding.

The debate surrounding the correlation between personal happiness and economic success persists, with some asserting the pivotal role of financial prosperity in contentment, while others argue for the influence of various non-economic factors on happiness. I concur with the former idea.

On the one hand, advocates of the view that personal happiness extends beyond economic success emphasize the significance of relationships, mental and physical health, and a sense of purpose or fulfillment in life. This is because even individuals with substantial wealth may find themselves unhappy if they lack meaningful connections, suffer from health issues, or feel unfulfilled in their personal or professional lives. For example, despite financial success, celebrities and wealthy individuals often grapple with depression, substance abuse, and personal struggles, revealing the inadequacy of wealth in ensuring happiness.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

On the other hand, others, myself included, believe that there are many reasons why personal happiness is closely tied to economic success. Firstly, financial stability provides individuals with the means to fulfill basic needs and pursue a comfortable lifestyle. It is true that a secure income allows for access to healthcare, education, and an overall higher quality of life, contributing significantly to overall well-being. Secondly, economic success opens doors to opportunities for leisure, travel, and experiences that enhance happiness. As a matter of fact, leisure activities, such as hobbies or recreational pursuits, can provide a source of relaxation and enjoyment. For instance, an artist might use saved income to travel to Paris to study the works of the Impressionists, enriching their artistic practice and understanding.

In conclusion, although the importance of relationships, mental and physical health, and a sense of purpose are undeniable, I am of the opinion that financial stability provides the means to meet basic needs and access opportunities for leisure and experiences

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