Phân tích"Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV and movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV and movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV and movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ''Others think parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV and movies by themselves”. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Diễn đạt "đọc sách" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "read book")
    • Main idea 1: When children learn things on their own, they remember it for a lifetime and also teach other students as well. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng AS WELL AS và AS WELL 
      • Supporting idea: Self-directed learning engages students actively in the learning process, promoting a deeper understanding and retention of the material.
      • Example:  For example, in modern school systems, children are involved in different activities and creative tasks that help them to learn fast and understand things faster than their parents.
    • Main idea 2: This would be much easier for the parents who are too busy nowadays.
      • Supporting idea: Self-directed learning can reduce the need for constant parental supervision, giving parents more flexibility to attend to their own responsibilities and commitments.
      • Example: For instance, a parent could enroll their child in an online learning platform, enabling the child to learn at their own pace and convenience. The parent's role would primarily involve periodic check-ins to ensure the child's progress and offer support as necessary.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm “Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này.
    • Main idea 1: it encourages family bonding. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "encourage"
      • Supporting idea:
        • In this day and age of hectic lives and busy schedules, reading together is a simple and enjoyable way for parents to take time out and focus on the family. 
        • Children also feel wanted and loved.
      • Example: Reading a book together every night before bed is a cherished family tradition that fosters relaxation, bonding, and a deep connection with our young children, emphasizing the importance of quality time and the joy of shared stories.

    • Main idea 2: it moulds children into becoming readers.
      • Supporting idea: this significantly increases the child’s potential for academic success as well as lifelong success in general. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các ý khác:
    • Main idea: if parents explain the stories to their children, they will be able to understand the meaning better. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "able" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Some children can understand the stories by reading, but they may not understand the actual lesson and meaning of the story like old people can. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "old people" tiếng anh
      • Sometimes children misunderstand the lessons given in the movies and programs and parents can better explain the stories. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG GIỚI TỪ "GIVEN" TIẾNG ANH 
    • Example: For instance, old people tell stories at night to make children sleep, in this way, children better understand the meaning and moral values that help them to become better human beings.

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