Phân tích"Some people think it is a good idea for students to take a gap year to travel or gain work experience before starting university. Others think gap years are a waste of time. Which viewpoint do you agree with?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 4/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think it is a good idea for students to take a gap year to travel or gain work experience before starting university. Others think gap years are a waste of time. Which viewpoint do you agree with?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 4/3/2023)

Some people think it is a good idea for students to take a gap year to travel or gain work experience before starting university. Others think gap years are a waste of time. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm it is a good idea for students to take a gap year to travel or gain work experience before starting university có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm it is a good idea for students to take a gap year to travel or gain work experience before starting university 
    • Main idea: Traveling or gaining work experience during a gap year can help students gain valuable life experience, independence, and new perspectives that can enrich their future academic and professional pursuits >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"perspective"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Students who take gap years may have a clearer sense of their academic and career goals, as well as improved study skills and time management when they return to university.
      • Example: A study by King (2011) found that gap year participants reported increased confidence, maturity, and a better understanding of themselves
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm it is a good idea for students to take a gap year to travel or gain work experience before starting university 
    • Main idea: Taking a break from academics can help students avoid academic burnout and rediscover their motivation and passion for learning.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Stepping away from academic pressure can give students the chance to explore other interests and activities, fostering a more holistic and balanced approach to their personal and academic lives. 
        • This break can also enable students to gain perspective, reflect on their goals and priorities, and reignite their intrinsic motivation and passion for learning, leading to greater long-term success and satisfaction in their academic endeavor
      • Example: 

        • Taking a gap year before her final semester, high school senior Sarah (my niece), originally on track for a competitive university, volunteered at a local animal shelter and rediscovered her passion for art, ultimately returning to her studies with renewed focus, balancing academic excellence with personal interests and graduating with both good grades and a newfound appreciation for lifelong learning.

           

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