Phân tích "Some people think hosting a major international sport event brings a lot of advantages. But some people think it only has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 25/9/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think hosting a major international sport event brings a lot of advantages. But some people think it only has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 25/9/2023)

Some people think hosting a major international sport event brings a lot of advantages. But some people think it only has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm some people think it is bad
    • Main idea 1:  the process of preparing for these events is often demanding
      • Supporting idea: 
        • the host country’s government tends to embark on infrastructure splurge, which takes a toll on national funding, especially in developing countries.
        • The government’s desire to build edifices such as big arenas or racing circuits can incur a huge amount of debts, putting the country in economic difficulties afterwards. 
        • Therefore, spending lavishly on a short-lived event can be a dubious strategy. 
      • Example: For the World Cup 2014, it took Brazil five years to revitalise its cities and construct various facilities including stadiums and indoor athletics arenas to meet the world-class standard set by FIFA. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "construct" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Since a lot of people will be visiting the country during such events, untoward incidents like terror attacks could happen >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "happen" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: records have shown that there is a twofold increase in crimes such as prostitution and petty theft when a country organises an event such as the World Cup or the Olympics.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm hosting an international sports event is good for the country & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: international sporting games can potentially stimulate the tourism sector
      • Supporting idea: it is a great chance for the host nations to promote their culture on a global stage.
      • Example: For example, since the pictures of beautifully garnished Vietnamese dishes made headlines during the SEA Games in 2003, Vietnam has been branded as the “Kitchen of the world” and a must visit destination for global food lovers.
    • Main idea 2: International sports events are ideal occasions for hosting countries to enhance their dignity >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh & tính từ "ideal" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It can be conceded that major events are likely to draw global attention to the hosting nations which is a golden prospect for them to promote cultures and traditions. 
      • Example: A prime example is Beijing, the capital of China, which successfully took advantage of the 2008 Olympics to acquire a high reputation.

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