Phân tích"Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present.discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI IELTS 19/11/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present.discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI IELTS 19/11/2022)

Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present.discuss both views and give your opinion (ĐỀ THI IELTS 19/11/2022)

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us
    • Main idea 1: They consider history to be irrelevant in our present life or in future.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng "relevant / irrelevant" tiếng anh   
      • Supporting idea: 
        • History is the field that is rarely used in people’s lives, and therefore, they would rather pay attention to science or technology than focus on something that brings no relevant values to the present or future
        • Studying history means memorizing dates, names, and facts and this information is not congruent with the need of our present situation >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng động từ "Need" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: People think that the past is different from the present, so it is wastage of time to learn about it.
      • Supporting idea: The time has changes, and the difficulties which their elders faced will never arise again >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách paraphrase từ "need/require"(Diễn tả"cần thiết/đòi...
      • Example: 
        • People’s living style and eating habits are changed, so they do not want to learn the old living style
        • People work manually in the past but now all work is completed with technology, so that’s why they are not interesting to learn history
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: History helps young people have thorough insights into their own culture and how their country has evolved
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People usually get inspiration from past events and great men through history.
        • The youth need to understand how their ancestors defended the nation against intruders throughout many dynasties and maintain a sovereign and free country, which would develop their patriotism and pride. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Word form "insight" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: history depicts the mistakes made in the past, hence helping people to avoid similar ones in the future.
      • Supporting idea: History guide people very well and make them capable that they would not repeat the mistakes of yesteryears. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some people argue that history holds little value, as it is irrelevant to modern society, while others believe that studying historical events provides essential insights into the present. This essay will discuss both perspectives before explaining why I support the latter view.

On the one hand, some individuals perceive history as an obsolete discipline (lẫc hậu, không còn phù hợp) that contributes negligible relevance (rất ít tác dụng) to contemporary life. They argue that historical knowledge is primarily theoretical (chủ yếu lý thuyết) and fails to address the pressing concerns (những vấn đề cấp bách) of today. Instead of memorizing names, dates, and events, which have little practical applicability (không máy thực tiễn), people should focus on technological advancements (tiến bộ khoa học kỹ thuật) that drive societal progress. Additionally, opponents of history contend that the evolution of civilization (sự phát triển của nền văn minh) renders past experiences irrelevant to contemporary challenges (không liên quan đến những thách thức hiện nay). Modern societies no longer rely on manual labor (lao động thủ công), nor do they face the same survival struggles as previous generations, making historical knowledge seem redundant (dư thừa, không cần thiết).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, history plays a pivotal role in shaping people’s understanding of their cultural heritage (di sản văn hóa) and national identity. Studying the past offers profound insights (những nhận định sâu sắc) into how civilizations have evolved, enabling individuals to appreciate their traditions and values. For instance, knowledge of how previous generations defended their sovereignty against foreign invasions fosters a strong sense of patriotism and national pride (lòng yêu nước và niềm tự hào dân tộc). Furthermore, history serves as a cautionary tale (bài học cảnh giác), allowing societies to learn from past mistakes and avoid repeating them. By analyzing historical conflicts, economic crises, and political misjudgments, policymakers can make informed decisions that prevent similar pitfalls (sai lầm nghiêm trọng) in the future.

In conclusion, while some believe history is of little consequence (không quan trọng), I firmly support the notion that studying it is crucial for preserving cultural identity and preventing past mistakes from recurring.

New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. Obsolete discipline: A subject that is no longer useful or relevant (lẫc hậu, không còn phù hợp)

2. Negligible relevance: Very little importance or connection (rất ít tác dụng)

3. Primarily theoretical: Mostly based on theory rather than practical application (chủ yếu lý thuyết)

4. Pressing concerns: Urgent and important issues (những vấn đề cấp bách)

5. Little practical applicability: Not very useful in real-life situations (không máy thực tiễn)

6. Technological advancements: Progress in science and technology (tiến bộ khoa học kỹ thuật)

7. Evolution of civilization: The development of human societies over time (sự phát triển của nền văn minh)

8. Irrelevant to contemporary challenges: Not related to modern-day problems (không liên quan đến những thách thức hiện nay)

9. Manual labor: Physical work done by hand (lao động thủ công)

10. Redundant: Unnecessary or excessive (dư thừa, không cần thiết)

11. Cultural heritage: Traditions, beliefs, and historical achievements of a society (di sản văn hóa)

12. Profound insights: Deep understanding and knowledge (những nhận định sâu sắc)

13. Patriotism and national pride: Love and pride for one's country (lòng yêu nước và niềm tự hào dân tộc)

14. Cautionary tale: A warning based on past mistakes (bài học cảnh giác)

15. Pitfalls: Mistakes or problems that may occur (sai lầm nghiêm trọng)

16. Of little consequence: Not very important (không quan trọng)

Synonyms & Antonyms

Obsolete discipline

• Synonyms: outdated subject, archaic field, antiquated study

• Antonyms: modern discipline, relevant subject, contemporary field

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Some argue that history is an obsolete discipline, lacking relevance to contemporary life.

Profound insights

• Synonyms: deep understanding, extensive knowledge, in-depth perception

• Antonyms: superficial insights, shallow knowledge, cursory understanding

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Studying history offers profound insights into cultural heritage and national identity.

Cautionary tale

• Synonyms: warning story, moral lesson, instructive example

• Antonyms: success story, inspirational tale, optimistic narrative

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: History serves as a cautionary tale, helping societies avoid repeating past mistakes.

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Inversion

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "Not only does history guide people well, but it also equips them with knowledge to prevent mistakes."

   • (Lịch sử không những hướng dẫn con người tốt mà còn trang bị cho họ kiến thức để tránh sai lầm.)

2. Relative clause

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "The youth need to understand how their ancestors defended the nation against intruders, which fosters patriotism."

   • (Giới trẻ cần hiểu được cách tổ tiên họ bảo vệ quốc gia, điều này nuôi dưỡng lòng yêu nước.)

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0 - Đảm bảo đầu ra - Thi không đạt, học lại FREE

>> IELTS Intensive Writing

>> IELTS Intensive Speaking

>> IELTS Intensive Listening

>> IELTS Intensive Reading

>> IELTS Cấp tốc

>> IELTS General

>> Thành tích học sinh IELTS TUTOR với hàng ngàn feedback được cập nhật hàng ngày