Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think government should subsidies food and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food. Discuss both views and gives your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 24/12/2022)
I. Đề bài
Some people think government should subsidies food and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food. Discuss both views and gives your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food.
- Main idea 1: Governments can apply this taxation measure to shift people’s eating habit from unhealthy diet to healthy ones >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "apply" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Imposing tax on unhealthy food items will increase the general price level of this category, and we know that price is the driving factor behind people’s purchasing behaviour.
- When the consumers notice that a specific food item is costlier, they will switch to the best alternative in terms of expens.
- Example: For example, if a particular popular junk food price rises to double than that of before, people might cut its consumption half, and compensate this gap by purchasing the alternative product. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "CONSUMPTION" TIẾNG ANH
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: this tax can encourage not just consumers, but also processed food industries and restaurants to change their habits.
- Supporting idea:
- Example: For example, since some US states imposed a sugar tax, many coffee and milk tea shops have offered a zero-sugar option at a discounted price.
- Main idea 1: Governments can apply this taxation measure to shift people’s eating habit from unhealthy diet to healthy ones >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "apply" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think government should subsidies food and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: People will have a choice to make between healthy and fast food, with both being priced equally. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase "fast food" (Diễn đạt "đồ ăn nhanh" tiếng anh)
- Supporting idea:
- Example:
- Main idea 2:
- Supporting idea:
- Example:
- Main idea 1: People will have a choice to make between healthy and fast food, with both being priced equally. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase "fast food" (Diễn đạt "đồ ăn nhanh" tiếng anh)
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Other argues that tax should be set on unhealthy food.
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