Phân tích"Some people think financial aid from international organization is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5) (Đề thi 22/12/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think financial aid from international organization is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa)

Some people think financial aid from international organization is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm”Some people think financial aid from international organization is important for developing countries”
    • Main idea 1: financial support directly alleviates economic problems   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "alleviate" tiếng anh  
      • Supporting idea: food, healthcare and accommodation for the needy
      • Example: Food banks are essential in combating hunger and food insecurity, offering vital assistance by collecting and distributing donated food to millions of individuals and families facing financial hardship, particularly in the United States where an estimated 38 million people struggle with hunger.
    • Main idea 2: financial aid assists economic development
      • Supporting idea:
        • External monetary flow enables executive bodies of those countries to carry out a variety of functions, for example infrastructural development, social healthcare, water and power supplies  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: investment in infrastructures such as roads, ports, airports, industrial zones and so on boosts economic progress)
        • This would help avoid stagnation and foster economic progress.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "fill" tiếng anh 
      • Example: The Marshall Plan, a post-World War II initiative, saw the U.S. provide billions in aid to Western Europe, playing a pivotal role in rebuilding infrastructure, reviving industries, and fostering enduring economic growth in the region.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm”practical aid is more useful”& nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1:  even if financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of science, law and medicine in order to encourage their development (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: practical assistance and advice are indispensable for further advancement)
      • Supporting idea: scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, and professional and systematic education and training programs are therefore more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "suggest" tiếng anh
      • Example: Zambia's success in combating malaria was enhanced by combining financial aid for resources with the expertise of medical professionals who trained local healthcare workers on diagnosis, treatment, and prevention methods, resulting in a significant decline in malaria cases.
    • Main idea 2: hands-on support is long-term solutions to sustainable development 
      • Supporting idea: technology transferring and labour force training have long-lasting effects on developing countries’ economy, shortening the gap between the first-world countries and the second-world ones.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  , Which rút gọn thành , Ving trong mệnh đề quan hệ
      • Example: The Green Senegal Project facilitated technology transfer in renewable energy by partnering with local communities to install and maintain solar energy systems, not only delivering clean energy but also creating long-term employment opportunities through training local technicians and reducing dependence on imported fossil fuels.

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