Phân tích "Some people say that playing sports helps to prepare children for their future work, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

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Some people say that playing sports helps to prepare children for their future work, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others disagree 
    • Main idea 1: Some argue that sports skills might not always directly translate to the demands of specific jobs or professions.
      • Supporting idea: Some careers demand specialized skills that are not directly related to athleticism or sports, such as technical expertise, creative abilities, or specific knowledge areas.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: A software engineer, for instance, may require expertise in coding and problem-solving, skills not primarily cultivated in sports. 
    • Main idea 2: While sports teach valuable skills, some careers may not necessarily require the same attributes honed in sports.
      • Supporting idea: Some professions, like scientists, accountants, or researchers, may prioritize intellectual or technical skills over physical attributes cultivated in sports.
      • Example:  Financial analysts rely on analytical skills and financial acumen, which differ from the physical attributes nurtured in sports. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people say that playing sports helps to prepare children for their future work & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea: Both serious and leisure sports participation offer opportunities for skill development in various areas.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Dedicated athletes often receive formal training and coaching, which allows them to develop specific skills relevant to their chosen sport such as technical abilities, strategic thinking, teamwork, discipline, and perseverance. 
        • Children who engage in sports during their free time may also develop valuable skills such as coordination, agility, decision-making, and adaptability. 
        • These skills are transferable and can benefit them in other aspects of life, including academics and social interactions. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ "benefit" tiếng anh
      • Example: For example, a student who actively participates in team sports learns important skills such as teamwork, communication, and leadership, which can be transferred to their academic pursuits, where they excel in group projects by effectively collaborating with peers and taking on leadership roles, as well as in social interactions, where they demonstrate strong interpersonal skills and the ability to work well with others.

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