Phân tích "Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (KÈM BÀI SỬA TASK RESPONSE HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others disagree
    • Main idea: Economic progress often comes at the cost of environmental degradation. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Rapid industrialization, resource exploitation, and excessive consumption can lead to pollution, deforestation, and other ecological challenges. 
        • The pursuit of economic gains can sometimes overshadow concerns for environmental well-being, resulting in long-term negative consequences for both the ecosystem and human health.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "outweigh", "advantage" & "disadvantage...
      • Example: 
        • An illustrative case is the BP Deepwater Horizon oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico in 2010, resulting from a blowout during BP's drilling of an oil well, releasing approximately 210 million gallons of oil into the Gulf
        • This leads to extensive environmental devastation, including the death of numerous marine creatures, destruction of wetlands and marshes, closure of fishing areas, and adverse effects on human health
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: With proper planning and strategic policies, a country can strike a balance between economic growth and environmental preservation. 
      • Supporting idea: This involves adopting sustainable practices, investing in green technologies, enforcing strict regulations, and promoting responsible consumption and production methods.
      • Example: 
        • For example, Costa Rica boasts a high GDP per capita and a low carbon footprint, an accomplishment attributed to a blend of factors such as investments in renewable energy, emphasis on sustainable agriculture, and dedication to environmental protection
        • Another example is Denmark, characterized by a high standard of living and a clean environment, achieved through various policies including a carbon tax, emphasis on energy efficiency, and a strong commitment to renewable energy.
    • Main idea 2: Advancements in technology and sustainable practices can lead to increased economic activity without causing irreparable harm to the environment  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ"irreversible"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Because advancements in technology and the adoption of sustainable practices allow for the optimization of resource utilization, reduction of waste, and minimization of environmental impacts, thereby enabling economic growth to occur without inflicting permanent damage on the ecosystem.
      • Example: Technologies like LED light bulbs, smart thermostats, and energy-efficient appliances have the potential to assist businesses and consumers in lowering energy expenses, while also contributing to the reduction of greenhouse gas emissions and air pollution.

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