Phân tích"Some people say that it is a waste of time on planning for the future and that it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 8/9/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say that it is a waste of time on planning for the future and that it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people say that it is a waste of time on planning for the future and that it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea:  People need to have goals and dreams to strive towards in order to have a sense of purpose and direction in their lives. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: A master plan plays a role as a map and guidance in the long run towards the final goals in order that people do not get distracted and lost during the process) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "goal" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • to achieve and fulfil these goals and be successful, it is essential that they make plans.
        • a competent planner is always oriented, and thus with perseverance, his efforts will surely pay off. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
        • Example: entrepreneurs often plan months, even years ahead, which enables them to make the most use of their time and resources. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "enable" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: A detailed plan enables people to anticipate upcoming barriers they have to overcome and requirements they have to fulfill. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "requirement" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It, therefore, provides people with sufficient time to get well-prepared to minimize unexpected consequences as well as seizing potential opportunities and tasting the fruit of success.
        • Meticulously outlined plans enable companies to develop different ‘what-if’ scenarios where managers attempt to envision potential risks involved and come up with contingency plans to tackle them. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "Risk"
        • Such well-thought-out elaborate schemes empower organizations to react quickly to constantly changing business environments. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "elaborate" tiếng anh
      • Example: Starting a business is another complex process that involves many different steps. A detailed business plan can help people to anticipate upcoming barriers and requirements.

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