Phân tích "Some people say government should give health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Sửa bài HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 5.5)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say government should give health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:

Some people say government should give health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.​

You should write at least 250 words.

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money (there are other more urgent fields that require huge financial support)
    • Main idea 1: Governments should allocate subsidies to education in order to build up high-quality human resources for sustainable future development  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Word form của "subsidy"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The quality of the schooling system is proportional to the competence of the future workforce. 
        • Therefore, a country can benefit from such skillful human resources in the long-term if they invest the tax budget to build schools, provide lecturers with training courses, or hire native speakers to teach a foreign language. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: the government should also spend money on solving transport problems. 
      • Supporting idea: Traffic congestion is a global issue these days, and we can only handle the scenario if new highways are opened, and narrow public roads are expanded. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "grapple" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people say government should give health care the first priorities & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: a number of particular diseases are on the rise in terms of popularity, and it would be costly to supply vaccines, medicines, or treatments. 
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: The remedies for those patients and the treatment facilities are often expensive, and the hospitals may find themselves in the struggle with financial problems without assistance from the tax system. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ"troublesome"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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