Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say good teachers are important for successful education, while others say the attitude of a student is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people say good teachers are important for successful education, while others say the attitude of a student is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people say good teachers are important for successful education
- Main idea 1: Skilled and knowledgeable teachers can impart subject matter expertise, offer diverse perspectives, and clarify complex concepts, which are vital for a comprehensive understanding of various topics.
- Supporting idea: Their expertise enables them to guide students through challenging material, provide context, and encourage critical thinking, thereby facilitating a deeper and more well-rounded grasp of the subject matter.
- Example: In Singapore, the Ministry of Education (MOE) has a rigorous teacher training program that ensures that all teachers are highly skilled and knowledgeable in their subject areas. The program includes both theoretical and practical components, and it is designed to prepare teachers to teach effectively in Singapore's diverse classrooms.
- Main idea 2: Effective educators can inspire and motivate students through their enthusiasm, passion for teaching, and dedication to their profession, fostering a positive learning environment.
- Supporting idea: This encourages students to actively participate, explore, and develop a genuine interest in the subjects they are studying.
- Example: In Vietnam, there is a teacher named Nguyen Thi Thanh Tuyen who is renowned for her unwavering passion for teaching and her profound dedication to her students, having taught for over 20 years and inspiring numerous learners to strive for learning and achievement.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Main idea 1: Skilled and knowledgeable teachers can impart subject matter expertise, offer diverse perspectives, and clarify complex concepts, which are vital for a comprehensive understanding of various topics.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others say the attitude of a student is more important & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: Students with positive attitudes take ownership of their education, displaying a willingness to explore, ask questions, and engage actively in the learning process, which can significantly enhance their understanding and retention of knowledge.
- Supporting idea: Positive attitudes encourage students to be curious and seek out additional information beyond what is provided, leading to a deeper exploration of topics.
- Example: A study published in the journal "Learning and Individual Differences" found that students with positive attitudes towards learning were more likely to engage in deep learning, which is a type of learning that involves understanding the material and being able to apply it to new situations.
- Main idea 2: A positive attitude encourages students to persevere through challenges and setbacks, enabling them to overcome obstacles and embrace a growth mindset.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
- Supporting idea: This attitude instills a belief that difficulties are opportunities for learning and improvement, fostering resilience, adaptability, and the willingness to continually develop skills and knowledge despite difficulties encountered along the educational journey.
- Main idea 1: Students with positive attitudes take ownership of their education, displaying a willingness to explore, ask questions, and engage actively in the learning process, which can significantly enhance their understanding and retention of knowledge.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people say good teachers are important for successful education
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