Phân tích"Some people believe these days teenagers are spending their leisure time at shopping centers instead of doing organized activities as sports or music . Do you think it has a negative or positive development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 9/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea:  This allows them to see the various aspects of life and when they realize that many people around them do not even have the basic necessities of life, they will learn to count their blessings.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ"factor/aspect"(Diễn đạt"tiêu chí"tiếng anh)
    • Supporting idea: These activities certainly help them gain insight into the lives of the underprivileged, realise how fortunate they are, and therefore inspire in them a higher sense of responsibility with the community.
    • Example: For instance, a teenager from a privileged background who engages in such activities may witness firsthand the lack of access to basic necessities like clean water, education, and healthcare. This eye-opening experience can lead to a profound appreciation for their own privileges
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: volunteering is a great opportunity to acquire valuable work experience. 
    • Supporting idea:
      • They can mention these stints in their resume when it is time to apply for a job. 
      • Youngsters who have done some kind of community work are more likely to get hired than someone who has absolutely no experience of volunteering.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "hire" "rent" "lease" tiếng anh
    • Example: A young individual participating in a volunteer program focused on environmental conservation gains hands-on experience in organizing and executing community cleanup initiatives. Later, when applying for a position in an environmental advocacy organization, they can showcase this experience on their resume.

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