Phân tích "Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea:  This allows them to see the various aspects of life and when they realize that many people around them do not even have the basic necessities of life, they will learn to count their blessings.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ"factor/aspect"(Diễn đạt"tiêu chí"tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea: These activities certainly help them gain insight into the lives of the underprivileged, realise how fortunate they are, and therefore inspire in them a higher sense of responsibility with the community.
      • Example: For instance, a teenager from a privileged background who engages in such activities may witness firsthand the lack of access to basic necessities like clean water, education, and healthcare. This eye-opening experience can lead to a profound appreciation for their own privileges
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: volunteering is a great opportunity to acquire valuable work experience. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • They can mention these stints in their resume when it is time to apply for a job. 
        • Youngsters who have done some kind of community work are more likely to get hired than someone who has absolutely no experience of volunteering.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "hire" "rent" "lease" tiếng anh
      • Example: A young individual participating in a volunteer program focused on environmental conservation gains hands-on experience in organizing and executing community cleanup initiatives. Later, when applying for a position in an environmental advocacy organization, they can showcase this experience on their resume.

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