Phân tích "Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education 
    • Main idea 1: An influx of university graduates in certain fields has led to increased competition for limited job opportunities, potentially resulting in underemployment or unemployment.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When the number of graduates exceeds the available job openings in a particular field, it creates a supply-demand mismatch. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • This oversaturation can lead to fierce competition for a limited number of positions.
      • Example: In the United States, there is an oversupply of law school graduates. This is due to the fact that many people are attracted to the high salaries and prestige of a legal career. However, there are not enough jobs available for all of these graduates, which has led to high levels of underemployment and unemployment among law school graduates.
    • Main idea 2: Universities may not adequately equip graduates with practical skills required by industries. 
      • Supporting idea: This perceived gap between academic knowledge and real-world demands can lead to skills mismatches.
      • Example: A study by the Association of American Colleges and Universities found that only 36% of employers believe that college graduates are well-prepared for the workforce. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others are of a different opinion & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: University education provides a broader scope of knowledge, critical thinking skills, and exposure to diverse subjects. 
      • Supporting idea: This intellectual development is seen as essential for producing well-rounded citizens capable of engaging with complex issues.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: A student who studies history will learn about different cultures and time periods. They will learn about the causes and consequences of historical events, and they will develop a deeper understanding of the world around them.
    • Main idea 2: Certain professions, such as medicine, law, engineering, and academia, require in-depth knowledge and specialized training that can best be acquired through university education.
      • Supporting idea: University education offers a structured and comprehensive curriculum that covers the breadth and depth of these subjects.
      • Example: In medicine, doctors need to have a deep understanding of human anatomy, physiology, and pathology. They also need to be able to diagnose and treat diseases. This requires years of training and education, which can best be acquired through university education.

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