Phân tích" Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have disadvantaged people like homeless and unemployed in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (PAPER-BASED 25/6/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích" Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have disadvantaged people like homeless and unemployed in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (PAPER-BASED 25/6/2022)

Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have disadvantaged people like homeless and unemployed in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: financial resources are becoming scarce, and many countries are already in debt  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: A developed country should examine its debt before volunteering to help other countries/nations)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "scare" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Debt will bring down the value of money and negatively impact the economy
        • It would aggravate the unemployment problem within the country >> it will cause serious social unrest    (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: it is unacceptable that the governments spend money on alleviating poverty abroad while unemployment, homelessness, and poverty exist in their own territories)
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Such welfare schemes should not only elevate people out of poverty but also create jobs
      • Supporting idea:
        • The resources can be used to bring about welfare schemes for those who are below the poverty line. It can help create jobs for people and thus reduce unemployment)
        • This, in turn, facilitates the economic growth of the country.    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allocate" tiếng anh 
        • These funds must be reserved for the development and maintenance of its own institutions and social security measures such as free health care and shelters for homeless people.    (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This can be used for providing shelter for the homeless, solving hunger, and educating the millions who still don’t have access to proper schooling. It can also be used to build our healthcare which has been under tremendous pressure over the last two years)
      • Example: Bangladesh's Rural Microfinance Project, offering small loans to women in rural areas, not only uplifted families from poverty but also catalyzed job creation in sectors such as garment manufacturing and food processing.
  • Có thể tham khảo thêm các ý khác cùng IELTS TUTOR:
    • Main idea: There is no evidence that the countries receiving foreign aid are progressing economically 
      • Supporting idea: a substantial amount may be captured by the ruling elite in recipient nations, either spent on luxury goods and real estate or diverted into tax heavens
      • Example:   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"complication" tiếng anh
• Nếu viết theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể tham khảo các ý sau cùng IELTS TUTOR: 
  • It is understandable and reasonable to donate money to the poorer nations as a gesture of basic human decency and humanity. No nation, after all, can live in prosperity when its neighbours are struggling with poverty. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
  • By offering financial assistance to their poor neighbours, countries can also put a curb on illegal immigration.
  • When a nation helps develop emerging markets, and that investment allows it to earn the financial rewards of close trading ties with recipient nations

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