Phân tích"Some people believe that school should teach foreign language for primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 19/3/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that school should teach foreign language for primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 19/3/2022)

Some people believe that school should teach foreign language for primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

HOẶC:

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages) tức là không nên dạy language ở primary school 
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: other subjects are more important at that age (maths, mother tongue language, science)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng" tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea:  learning a new language is confusing and could delay development of child's first language
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: young children learn faster 
        • Supporting idea:
          • Their brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilitates learning another language, and unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by self-consciousness  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They are less self-conscious or shy)
          • They pick up the pronunciation better
          • They enjoy copying and learning through games  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "get" tiếng anh 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centred approach, thus maintaining learners’ enthusiasm and progress
        • Supporting idea: Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure, while learning other languages subsequently will be easier for them. They may also gain a better understanding of other culture.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: other subjects are more important at that age (maths, mother tongue language, science)
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: learning a new language is confusing and could delay development of child's first language
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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