Phân tích"Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than classical music performers. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi ngày 11/6/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than classical music performers. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi ngày 11/6/2022)

Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than classical music performers. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some disagree
    • Main idea 1: Musicians were expected to fulfill a lot of tasks as part of their positions, including composing, performing, conducting, teaching, organizing, and managing other musicians.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"expect"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Some spend their entire lives learning to master a particular musical instrument or style of music
        • Classical music tends to be performed live on stage, and therefore musicians need to give a perfect performance every time, which could be very stressful.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Word form của "expect"
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: because classical music is generally listened to by society's more influential and wealthy classes, classical music composers are put under a lot of pressure.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than classical music performers & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "deserve" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: a person’s income will always be proportional to the amount of money they can generate
      • Supporting idea:  
        • Music concerts and movies depend on the popularity of a few stars and again generate lots of money; that is why these people are paid more
        • Pop stars receive royalties from sales of their records or concert tickets
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: most pop stars have short-lived careers as pop music continues to evolve and new stars replace the old.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Most pop stars need to spend countless hours in the studio every year in order to record new music, followed by many weeks and months touring the world performing and promoting their music to their fans  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "continue"(Diễn đạt "tiếp tục" tiếng anh)
        • Many pop stars become exhausted and burnout early in their career or turn to drugs and alcohol in order to cope with the stress
      • Example: 

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