Phân tích"Some people believe that one world government would be better than national governments. Do you think the benefits of this system outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (25/09/2021)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that one world government would be better than national governments. Do you think the benefits of this system outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (25/09/2021)

Some people believe that one world government would be better than national governments. Do you think the benefits of this system outweigh the disadvantages? (Đề thi ngày 25/09/2021)

Hoặc:

The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Each country has, to varying degrees, chosen a government that represents their values and enacts laws based on the kind of nation they wish to have.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: Some countries, such as those in Western Europe, lean more towards a socialist system that ensures a minimum standard of living for all citizens >< others place greater emphasis on individual empowerment, others on transparency and still others on security over freedom
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Smaller or poorer nations may feel they are not fairly represented in a world government.
      • Supporting idea: A world government might be dominated by countries with greater economic strength, and those superpowers are likely to exert their influence over the international decision making. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt May – might (có lẽ)
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Life would become much more convenient
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The freedom of transportation that arises will relieve humanity of the constraints of physical distance. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN BIỆT "RISE / RAISE / ARISE" TIẾNG ANH
          • One government would mean uniform units of measurement >> There would be no need to convert between miles and kilometers or pounds and kilograms
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: A single government would be more effective and focused
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example:  A single centralized government could better protect the environment by enacting strict legislation against the burning of fossil fuels 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Each country has, to varying degrees, chosen a government that represents their values and enacts laws based on the kind of nation they wish to have.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: Some countries, such as those in Western Europe, lean more towards a socialist system that ensures a minimum standard of living for all citizens >< others place greater emphasis on individual empowerment, others on transparency and still others on security over freedom
      • Main idea 2: Smaller or poorer nations may feel they are not fairly represented in a world government.
        • Supporting idea: A world government might be dominated by countries with greater economic strength, and those superpowers are likely to exert their influence over the international decision making. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "dominate" tiếng anh 
        • Example: 
    • Conclusion: paraphrase intro câu 2 

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