Phân tích "Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays. Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation?" IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays. Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation?" IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays. Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: They want to flaunt their wealth.
      • Supporting idea: Weddings and events are a good platform to show off their designer clothes, jewellery and makeup.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích phrasal verb: show off
      • Example: 
        • In 2018, Priyanka Chopra and Nick Jonas' opulent wedding in Jodhpur, India, estimated at over $20 million and attended by global celebrities, featured custom-made designer attire and millions of dollars in jewelry. 
        • The media's extensive coverage and viral photos of the extravagant event made it a symbol of the couple's affluence and societal status
           
    • Main idea 2: People these days organise such functions to grab attention on social media in the form of likes and comments.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Social media platforms often provide instant gratification through likes, comments, and shares. 
        • Organizing events with the intent of showcasing them on social media allows individuals to seek validation and recognition from their online peers.
      • Example: In 2019, an Indian couple's viral $1 million wedding was a testament to their desire to impress their social media followers, featuring extravagant details across the venue, food, entertainment, and professional photography and videography capturing every moment.
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
      • Main idea: Marriage is once in a lifetime event; therefore, people spend lavishly to make it a special and memorable moment.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "expensive" IELTS SPEAKING & WRITING
      • Supporting idea: These weddings bring all family members, friends and relatives at one place, so they can get an opportunity to spend some quality time together with lots of fun and enjoyment.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Advocate for celebrations that highlight the values of love, commitment, and relationships rather than extravagant displays of wealth. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: This can involve scaling down the event's grandeur in favor of meaningful connections.
      • Example: Emily Ratajkowski's small, private wedding at a New York City courthouse marked a departure from the typically lavish celebrity ceremonies, prioritizing love and commitment over an extravagant celebration despite her fame and resources.
    • Main idea 2: Encourage influential figures, like celebrities, to set an example by promoting more moderate celebrations. 
      • Supporting idea: A shift in their approach can influence public perceptions and behaviors.
      • Example: The wedding of Prince Harry and Meghan Markle, while a royal affair, showcased elements of modesty and inclusivity. The couple emphasized various values that resonated with a broader audience. Their focus on charity, inclusion, and environmentally friendly practices throughout the wedding had a significant influence on public perceptions.

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