Phân tích"Some people believe that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare centre outweigh its disadvantages? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 19/9/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare centre outweigh its disadvantages? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 19/9/2023)

Some people believe that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare centre outweigh its disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: Share responsibilities with state-owned healthcare institutions in taking care of the public’s health >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ và danh từ "share" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • reduce the pressure on state-owned healthcare institutions in terms of overload of patients and finance >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng IN TERMS OF trong tiếng anh 
        • insufficient facilities and professional capability in state hospital
      • Example:Singapore's compulsory Medisave scheme, funded by both workers and employers, alleviates pressure on public healthcare by reducing reliance on state-owned hospitals, lessening the government's financial burden, and enhancing the overall quality of healthcare, complemented by investments in primary healthcare services.

    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: those who choose to pay for private healthcare services will experience many benefits  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Patients have greater choices in medical services)
      • Supporting idea:
        • since private medical establishments are not limited by national budget, there is more access to advanced treatment and modern technology >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "treatment" tiếng anh
        • Benefits: 
          • the quality and speed of treatments >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "quality"
          • short waiting times for appointments and operations
          • more private and comfortable facilities.
      • Example: In the United States, private healthcare is the primary source of healthcare for most Americans. Private healthcare services are provided by a variety of healthcare providers, including hospitals, clinics, and doctors' offices.

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