Phân tích "Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Children who are forced to do more homework in their free time are becoming less sociable
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: There are many fun and enjoyable activities that kids can do in their free time to keep them fruitfully occupied. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "enjoyable" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Outdoor activities benefit children to socialise and play with other children which ultimately teaches them important soft skills. 
        • Children should spend their free time with their friends in the parks or they can spend their time on activities that they enjoy doing the most >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "spend" tiếng anh 
        • Playing in the park with their friends contributes to their social skills in a positive way.
      • Example: 

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