Phân tích"Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead.
    • Main idea 1: an increased number of wild animals could threaten the existence of human beings  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the overpopulation of wild animals could become a danger to our existence) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As human populations expand and encroach upon natural habitats, conflicts between humans and wild animals can escalate. 
        • This can lead to attacks on humans, damage to property, and loss of livestock, posing direct threats to human safety and livelihoods.
      • Example: if zebras are protected in African forests, their population are likely to increase, and they will destroy human living areas and farms. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "likely"
    • Main idea 2: protecting wild animals can be expensive for developing countries where human welfare should be made a top priority. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form "expense" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: These funds must be allocated to humanity difficulties, as most third world nations are still struggling against starvation and deathly ailments.
      • Example: In Tanzania, despite spending millions on wildlife conservation, including anti-poaching patrols and ranger training, persistent underfunding and understaffing contribute to ongoing threats of poaching and habitat loss.

  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này.
    • Main idea 1: all of them are essential and play an important role in our ecosystem. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • If one of these becomes extinct, the whole ecosystem will be destroyed and this can exert a catastrophic effect on our environment. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Should there be one of these animals extinct, then the ecosystem would be unbalanced, and it may have a catastrophic effect on the environment)
        • If only a part of the animals are protected, this will result in biodiversity loss, leading to the loss of food security.
      • Example: In recent years the number of bees has been declining across the world, which makes farmers aware of the important roles the bees have played in agricultural processes.
    • Main idea 2: As humans are are the main reasons their existence are at risk, we should protect all of them >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "protect" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Due to exploit and overuse of natural resources by humans, many these wild creatures are getting wiped out >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic "Natural Resources"
      • Example: 
        • A study by the International Union for Conservation of Nature (IUCN) found that human activities are the primary threat to 94% of threatened mammals.
        • A study by the World Wildlife Fund (WWF) found that global wildlife populations have declined by 68% since 1970.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các ý khác:
    • Main idea: The presence of these wild creature is beneficial to human beings. 
    • Supporting idea: Scientists have discovered that some wild animals could be used as a medical therapy.
    • Example: the blood of a snake may be used to heal skin diseases.

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