Phân tích "Some people believe skills such as cooking should be taught at schools, while others disagree. Discuss both views and tell your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe skills such as cooking should be taught at schools, while others disagree. Discuss both views and tell your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people believe skills such as cooking should be taught at schools, while others disagree. Discuss both views and tell your own opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others disagree 
    • Main idea 1: Traditional academic subjects already compete for limited class time. 
      • Supporting idea: Adding practical skills might stretch resources and take away from core subjects like mathematics, science, and language arts.
    • Main idea 2: Critics contend that families should take the lead in teaching such skills, allowing schools to focus on academic education.
      • Supporting idea: Families often have the advantage of passing down cultural cooking traditions and family recipes, creating a personalized learning environment that might not be replicated in a school setting.
      • Example: In a 2020 article in the New York Times, education writer Dana Goldstein interviewed parents and educators about the debate over the role of schools in teaching practical skills. One of the parents she interviewed, a stay-at-home mother named Sarah, said that she believes that families should take the lead in teaching practical skills to their children>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe skills such as cooking should be taught at schools & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1:  Practical skills are essential for daily life, and cooking is a fundamental skill that empowers individuals to prepare healthy and balanced meals for themselves, promoting lifelong well-being.
      • Supporting idea: Cooking education can foster a deeper understanding of nutrition, food safety, and sustainable food practices, promoting informed consumer choices.
      • Example: One example of this movement is the "Cooking with Mom" program, which was launched by the Ministry of Education and Training in 2019. The program aims to teach cooking skills to students in grades 7-9. The program is taught by trained volunteers, and it includes lessons on how to prepare healthy and affordable meals.
    • Main idea 2: Learning to cook equips students with a valuable life skill that enhances their independence, self-sufficiency, and ability to make healthier food choices even after leaving the educational system.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Proficiency in cooking allows individuals to prepare their own meals, reducing reliance on processed or convenience foods. 
        • This cultivates a sense of self-sufficiency and the ability to nourish oneself without relying solely on restaurants or pre-packaged meals.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: In the United States, there is a growing movement to teach cooking skills in schools. This is due to a number of factors, including the rising rates of obesity and diet-related diseases, the increasing awareness of the importance of healthy eating, and the desire to give students the skills they need to live independently.

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