Phân tích "Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Access to the internet and mobile phones can facilitate job searching and networking. 
      • Supporting idea: Unemployed individuals can browse job websites, submit applications online, and communicate with potential employers more conveniently.
      • Example: John, who was unemployed, used the internet and a mobile phone to search for jobs. He visited job websites, submitted online applications, and communicated with potential employers through email and phone calls. This convenient access helped him find a new job opportunity and connect with employers more easily.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Internet access enables unemployed individuals to access online courses, educational resources, and training materials. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form "educational" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This can help them acquire new skills, improve existing ones, and increase their chances of finding employment.
      • Example: Online course platforms like Coursera, Udemy, and LinkedIn Learning offer courses from renowned universities and institutions covering diverse subjects such as business, technology, and humanities, providing both free and paid options with available financial aid.

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