Phân tích"Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community
    • Main idea 1: Complete assimilation may lead to the loss of cultural diversity, which can be detrimental to the richness of a society.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Complete assimilation often involves adopting the dominant culture's language, values, and customs to the extent that the distinctive features of individual cultures become diluted or disappear. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • This homogenization process can result in a society where everyone conforms to a single cultural model, erasing the unique contributions that different cultural groups bring.
      • Example: For instance, the suppression of Catalan language in Spain during the Franco regime threatened the cultural identity of Catalan communities.
    • Main idea 2: Immigrants may face difficulties in reconciling their original identity with the pressure to conform to the majority culture.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Immigrants often come from diverse cultural backgrounds with distinct values, traditions, and norms. 
        • The pressure to conform to the majority culture can lead to a clash between their original identity and the expectations of the new cultural environment.
      • Example: Immigrants who struggle to learn the dominant language may feel isolated and excluded from social interactions, hindering their integration and contributing to a sense of disconnection from both their original and new cultures.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Assimilation can contribute to a sense of unity and shared identity within a society, fostering social cohesion.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Assimilation implies the adoption of common cultural elements, such as language, values, and customs. 
        • When individuals share these cultural traits, it creates a common framework that facilitates communication, understanding, and a sense of belonging.
      • Example: The American Dream has been a unifying force in the United States, drawing immigrants from diverse backgrounds and fostering a shared commitment to values such as hard work, opportunity, and individual freedom, contributing to national unity despite cultural differences
    • Main idea 2: Learning and adopting the local language, customs, and values may help immigrants integrate more easily into the new community.
      • Supporting idea: Proficiency in the local language facilitates effective communication with community members, enabling immigrants to engage in conversations, build relationships, and participate in social activities, which are crucial aspects of integration.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: In multilingual countries like Canada or Australia, strong English language skills are often essential for securing employment, accessing training opportunities, and climbing the career ladder. Learning the local language empowers immigrants to participate fully in the economic sector and achieve financial stability.

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