Phân tích"Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Paper-based 28/5/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Paper-based 28/5/2022)

Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem
    • Main idea: Any species of plants and animals have already disappeared from our world, and it is impossible to get them back  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: it is futile to save the weak species unless these species themselves are able to continue their life)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "species" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • In 2013, a United Nations study found out that several species disappeared from our ecosystem because of deforestation
        • They even point out that even if we bring them back, there is no room for them to survive today  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"survive"tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • The south Andean toad became extinct in 1968, and the Sri Lanka legume tree died out completely in the 1980s. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này (I insist that there are many measures that governments and individuals can take to stop the negative effect that our activities have on our planet)
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về governments) Governments around the world should come together to address this issue 
      • Supporting idea:  There are many examples of successful steps taken by the government and the NGOs to prove that if we try, we can achieve. 
      • Example: For instance, the “Royal Bengal Tiger” our national animal, was once on the verge of extinction, but with the efforts of our government and some NGOs we have succeeded in bringing up their numbers>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về individuals)  Individuals can also spread awareness about the destructive effect that some of our activities have on the planet
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Individuals can actively engage in spreading awareness about environmentally destructive practices, such as deforestation, overconsumption, and pollution. 
        • By sharing information through social media, community events, or educational initiatives, they contribute to the promotion of sustainable practices. 
      • Example: Research shows that grassroots movements and individual advocacy play a crucial role in driving positive environmental change.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các biện pháp có thể học thêm:
    • Overexploitation of natural resources should be reduced. 
    • Hunting and smuggling of wild animals should be banned. 
    • Overgrazing and overcultivation should be stopped so that we can have sustainable development. 
    • Afforestation should be encouraged, which means planting trees where there were none before.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
    • Many other steps, such as using pre-fabricated materials for doors and windows, have reduced the cutting of trees for wood
    • Governments around the world should come together to address the issue of deforestation which is the main cause of the disappearance of endangered species

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