Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: An abundance of possessions will lead to advancements in technology, education and healthcare, thus benefiting its citizens beyond materialistic satisfaction
- Supporting idea:
- Technology advancements have also led to improved communication, transportation, and access to information, which can enhance the standard of living and opportunities available to citizens. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "improved" tiếng anh
- Increased wealth can lead to investment in public goods such as infrastructure and education, which can have long-term benefits for the community.
- Example:
- For example, the development of medical technology and treatments has significantly increased life expectancy and improved overall health outcomes.
- For instance, better roads and public transportation systems can increase mobility and access to job opportunities while a well-educated population can contribute to a more innovative and prosperous economy.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "mobility" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: An abundance of possessions will lead to advancements in technology, education and healthcare, thus benefiting its citizens beyond materialistic satisfaction
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: Citizens of developed countries have innumerable avenues to enjoy their life.
- Supporting idea: Each additional dollar in a resident of a rich nation increases chances of purchasing products that bring joy and pleasure to him or her >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "resident" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Developed countries often have more diverse and accessible cultural offerings, such as museums, theaters, and festivals, which can enrich the lives of citizens. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"offering"tiếng anh
- Developed countries often have more opportunities for travel and exploration, both within their own country and abroad, which can expand citizens' perspectives and provide them with new experiences.
- Main idea: Citizens of developed countries have innumerable avenues to enjoy their life.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
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