Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in their jobs?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in their jobs?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: people who have excellent interpersonal skills and the ability to collaborate are more likely to build good relations with their colleagues and perform better at work (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: people who possess good communication skills can often gain the love and trust of their co-workers, and stand a higher chance of climbing the career ladder)
- Supporting idea:
- In this modern society, people rarely work individually and often need to rely on others to get the best result. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "rely" & phrasal verb"rely on/upon sb/sth"
- In contrast, those who lack such critical skills may suffer from isolation or miscommunication and trigger conflict among workers, hindering the overall working process.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: people who have excellent interpersonal skills and the ability to collaborate are more likely to build good relations with their colleagues and perform better at work (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: people who possess good communication skills can often gain the love and trust of their co-workers, and stand a higher chance of climbing the career ladder)
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: the ability to sell products or services is of paramount significance in any business, and this requires strong social skills. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "Ability" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Example: For example, an employee with excellent social skills is able to have an impact in front of customers or clients; as a result, products or services can be perceived as high-value.
- Main idea: the ability to sell products or services is of paramount significance in any business, and this requires strong social skills. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "Ability" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
In today's cutthroat job market (thị trường việc làm cạnh tranh khốc liệt - an extremely competitive employment environment), employers increasingly prioritize hiring individuals with stellar interpersonal skills (kỹ năng giao tiếp xuất sắc - exceptional ability to interact and communicate effectively) alongside academic credentials. I wholeheartedly agree (hoàn toàn đồng ý - completely and strongly agree) that social skills are just as important as qualifications for professional success.
Firstly, employees with exceptional people skills (kỹ năng con người xuất sắc - outstanding ability to connect with others) are more likely to cultivate harmonious workplace relationships (xây dựng mối quan hệ hài hòa trong công việc - develop friendly and cooperative interactions at work) and excel in teamwork. In today’s work environment, solitary work (công việc đơn độc - tasks completed alone without collaboration) is rare, and success often hinges on collaboration. Those adept at communication can garner trust and admiration (đạt được sự tin tưởng và ngưỡng mộ - gain credibility and respect from others) from their colleagues, making them indispensable to a company’s success. Conversely, individuals lacking social competence may grapple with (vật lộn với - struggle with) miscommunication issues (vấn đề hiểu lầm trong giao tiếp - difficulties arising from unclear interactions), potentially leading to workplace conflicts that impede operational efficiency (cản trở hiệu suất hoạt động - hinder the smooth functioning of a company).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Secondly, persuasive communication (giao tiếp thuyết phục - the ability to convince others effectively) is the cornerstone of (nền tảng của - the most important part of) business success, especially in customer-facing roles. Employees with outstanding negotiation skills (kỹ năng đàm phán xuất sắc - the ability to discuss and reach agreements effectively) can influence clients and enhance brand perception (nhận thức thương hiệu - how a company or product is viewed by customers). For instance, a salesperson who articulates product benefits eloquently (trình bày lợi ích của sản phẩm một cách trôi chảy - explain advantages clearly and persuasively) is more likely to foster customer loyalty (tạo dựng lòng trung thành của khách hàng - build long-term customer commitment) and drive revenue. Without such abilities, even the most technically proficient employees may struggle to convey their expertise effectively.
In conclusion, social skills play an instrumental role (vai trò quan trọng - crucial role) in workplace success, enabling employees to collaborate effectively and drive business growth. Therefore, they should be regarded as equally important as academic qualifications.
New Vocabulary with Definitions
Cutthroat job market (thị trường việc làm cạnh tranh khốc liệt) – An extremely competitive employment environment.
Stellar interpersonal skills (kỹ năng giao tiếp xuất sắc) – Exceptional ability to interact and communicate effectively.
Wholeheartedly agree (hoàn toàn đồng ý) – Completely and strongly agree.
Exceptional people skills (kỹ năng con người xuất sắc) – Outstanding ability to connect with others.
Cultivate harmonious workplace relationships (xây dựng mối quan hệ hài hòa trong công việc) – Develop friendly and cooperative interactions at work.
Solitary work (công việc đơn độc) – Tasks completed alone without collaboration.
Garner trust and admiration (đạt được sự tin tưởng và ngưỡng mộ) – Gain credibility and respect from others.
Grapple with (vật lộn với) – Struggle with.
Miscommunication issues (vấn đề hiểu lầm trong giao tiếp) – Difficulties arising from unclear interactions.
Impeded operational efficiency (cản trở hiệu suất hoạt động) – Hinder the smooth functioning of a company.
Persuasive communication (giao tiếp thuyết phục) – The ability to convince others effectively.
The cornerstone of (nền tảng của) – The most important part of.
Outstanding negotiation skills (kỹ năng đàm phán xuất sắc) – The ability to discuss and reach agreements effectively.
Brand perception (nhận thức thương hiệu) – How a company or product is viewed by customers.
Articulates product benefits eloquently (trình bày lợi ích của sản phẩm một cách trôi chảy) – Explain advantages clearly and persuasively.
Foster customer loyalty (tạo dựng lòng trung thành của khách hàng) – Build long-term customer commitment.
Instrumental role (vai trò quan trọng) – Crucial role.
Synonyms & Antonyms
Synonyms:
Cutthroat job market → Highly competitive employment sector, fierce labor market, ruthless hiring environment
Garner trust and admiration → Earn respect, gain credibility, win confidence
Persuasive communication → Compelling speech, effective rhetoric, impactful dialogue
Antonyms:
Cutthroat job market → Stable job market, non-competitive sector, secure employment field
Garner trust and admiration → Lose credibility, break trust, damage reputation
Persuasive communication → Weak argumentation, unconvincing speech, ineffective discourse
Advanced Grammar Structures with Vietnamese Translations
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ In today’s work environment, solitary work is rare, and success often hinges on collaboration.
(Trong môi trường làm việc ngày nay, công việc đơn độc hiếm khi xảy ra và thành công thường phụ thuộc vào sự hợp tác.)
Grammar point: Complex sentence with hinges on (phụ thuộc vào) as a dependent clause.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ Without such abilities, even the most technically proficient employees may struggle to convey their expertise effectively.
(Nếu không có những kỹ năng đó, ngay cả những nhân viên giỏi nhất về kỹ thuật cũng có thể gặp khó khăn trong việc truyền đạt chuyên môn của mình một cách hiệu quả.)
Grammar point: Conditional sentence using without instead of "if" for a more advanced structure.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ Employees with outstanding negotiation skills can influence clients and enhance brand perception.
(Nhân viên có kỹ năng đàm phán xuất sắc có thể tác động đến khách hàng và nâng cao nhận thức về thương hiệu.)
Grammar point: Parallel structure (influence clients and enhance brand perception).
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