Phân tích"Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng negative):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative 
    • Main idea: it takes funding away from the average citizen.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "pay" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Any money diverted towards preparing world-class athletes for international competitions is to some extent a waste as it cuts into the budget for facilities for average people  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "share" tiếng anh 
      • Direct the funding away from these expensive gyms for top athletes, and it would be possible to build many more facilities that serve a much wider and underserved segment of the population.
    • Example: A study by the National Bureau of Economic Research found that increased public spending on elite sports programs can lead to a decrease in funding for public recreation facilities and programs 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative 
    • Main idea: The government should take care of the health and physical development of all citizens   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allocate" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Every working citizen pays taxes and should have equal rights for social amenities, including specialized sports centres
      • Funding of special-purpose sports facilities might be considered social inequality    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "yet" tiếng anh
    • Example: Helsinki, Finland prioritizes public health by offering a network of free or low-cost sports facilities like pools, tracks, courts, and gyms throughout the city for residents of all income levels.

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