Phân tích "Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. 

Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: The primary reason behind the overuse of smartphones among children is because of lack of parental supervision. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ LACK trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • In many modern families, children are left alone, as their parents are engaged at work either at their home or at their office. 
        • This gives ample opportunity for children to manipulate their time which has to be allotted to their studies.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Another reason is social media has become the default form of communication among youths. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ "reason" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: If children do not constantly access their smartphones to keep up with the activities of their peers, they may become socially isolated.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea 1: eyesight can be damaged through constant exposure to damaging blue light, with children’s developing eyes being particularly vulnerable.
      • Supporting idea: When they are using their phones, their eyes are glued to the screen of the phones which cause vision problem in the long run. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: smartphone use is often directly related to a sedentary lifestyle as it commonly replaces physical activity. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "lifestyle" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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