Phân tích "Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in buliding large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 27/4/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in buliding large outdoor public spaces.To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 27/4/2023)

Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in buliding large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Large outdoor public spaces provide numerous benefits for communities, including opportunities for exercise, social interaction, and cultural events.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Large outdoor public spaces offer ample room for physical activities such as walking, jogging, and cycling, which can promote a healthy lifestyle and reduce the risk of obesity and related health problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "promote"
        • These spaces can also encourage social interaction and community engagement by providing a gathering place for people to meet, play, and participate in events such as concerts, festivals, and markets. 
      • Example: In New York City's Central Park, which spans over 800 acres and hosts various recreational and cultural events such as concerts, festivals, and outdoor movie screenings, people can come together and socialize, promoting a sense of unity and belonging within the community.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Investing in public spaces can help to promote tourism and boost local economies by attracting visitors to the area.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Investing in public spaces can help to promote tourism and boost local economies by creating attractive destinations that draw visitors to the area, leading to increased spending on local businesses and services >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: lead to sth
        • Well-designed public spaces can improve the quality of life for residents and make a city or town more desirable for both visitors and new residents.
      • Example: For example, the High Line in New York City is a large outdoor public space that was created on a former elevated railway line. The park attracts millions of visitors each year and has been credited with boosting local business, promoting tourism, and providing a unique space for outdoor recreation and cultural events.

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