Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Scientists have been warning for many years about environmental protection and how important it is to limit our personal energy consumption. What are the causes of the over-consumption of electricity? How can people be encouraged to use less energy?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Scientists have been warning for many years about environmental protection and how important it is to limit our personal energy consumption. What are the causes of the over-consumption of electricity? How can people be encouraged to use less energy?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
- Main idea 1: The growing population and expanding use of electronic devices and appliances have led to an increase in energy demand.
- Supporting idea: Modern lifestyles, which heavily rely on technology and gadgets, contribute to higher electricity consumption.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Example: The popularity of EVs is rising due to increased environmental awareness, but their electricity demand and associated appliances amplify energy consumption.
- Main idea 2: Outdated and inefficient appliances and infrastructure can consume more energy than necessary.
- Supporting idea: Many older buildings, for instance, lack proper insulation and energy-efficient HVAC systems.
- Example:
- A study by the U.S. Department of Energy found that older homes can use up to 50% more energy than newer homes.
- The study also found that the average older home could save up to $500 per year on energy costs by making energy efficiency improvements.
- Main idea 1: The growing population and expanding use of electronic devices and appliances have led to an increase in energy demand.
- Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2
- Main idea 1: Governments, non-profits, and educational institutions should prioritize campaigns to educate the public about the environmental consequences of over-consumption and the benefits of energy conservation.
- Supporting idea: Providing information on how to reduce energy use can empower individuals to make informed choices.
- Example: The US Department of Energy's "Energy Star" program, which helps consumers identify and purchase energy-efficient appliances and electronics.
- Main idea 2: Promote the use of energy-efficient appliances and technologies. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
- Supporting idea: Governments can enforce energy efficiency standards, and manufacturers can produce products that consume less energy.
- Example: The European Union (EU) has implemented a number of energy efficiency standards for appliances and other products. These standards require manufacturers to produce products that meet certain minimum energy efficiency requirements.
- Main idea 1: Governments, non-profits, and educational institutions should prioritize campaigns to educate the public about the environmental consequences of over-consumption and the benefits of energy conservation.
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
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