Phân tích"Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can get study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 15/07/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can get study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 15/07/2023)

Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can get study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Schools provide a structured environment that nurtures holistic development in children. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Education is not just about acquiring knowledge but also developing social skills, emotional intelligence, and physical abilities.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ"intelligent"tiếng anh
        • Schools offer a variety of extracurricular activities, such as sports, arts, and group projects, which foster teamwork, discipline, creativity, and self-expression. 
        • These experiences contribute to a well-rounded education that cannot be fully replicated through online learning.
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the journal "Health Education & Behavior" found that children who attended schools with a school-wide focus on wellness were more likely to eat healthy foods, be physically active, and have good mental health.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Schools serve as important social settings where children interact with peers from diverse backgrounds. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Interpersonal skills, teamwork, and cooperation are honed through face-to-face interactions, which are essential for personal growth and success in the real world. 
        • In school, children learn to navigate social dynamics, develop empathy, and understand the importance of community and cultural diversity.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"navigate"tiếng anh
        • Such skills are not solely acquired by consuming information online but through meaningful interactions with teachers and fellow students.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "American Educational Research Journal" found that children who attended schools with a diverse student body were more likely to be civically engaged and participate in community activities.

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