Phân tích "School teaching should focus on success on the workforce and less attention should be given to academic achievement , to what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 31/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "School teaching should focus on success on the workforce and less attention should be given to academic achievement , to what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 31/3/2023)

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree?

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School teaching should focus on success on the workforce and less attention should be given to academic achievement , to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Teaching practical skills such as cooking, sewing, and woodworking can help students develop problem-solving, creativity, and critical thinking skills, which are transferable to other areas of their lives >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "thinking" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Practical skills require students to think critically and creatively to solve problems.
      • Example: For example, when cooking, students need to figure out how to combine ingredients and adjust cooking times and temperatures to create a dish that tastes good. This type of problem-solving skill is essential for success in many areas of life, from business to personal relationships.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Not all students may have the opportunity to learn these skills from their family or friends. 
      • Supporting idea: Some students may come from disadvantaged backgrounds or may not have access to resources to learn these skills outside of school >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
      • Example: A student from a low-income household may not have the opportunity to learn practical skills from their family or friends, as families who struggle financially often lack the resources or time to teach their children such skills, which can result in a lack of access to equipment or tools at home, thus limiting opportunities for development outside of school.

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