Phân tích "Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 5/1/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It is important for developed countries to find ways to invest in developing nations, instead of just donating money. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When developed countries give money to undeveloped countries, it will help citizens in these countries solve short-term problems, and it will not last long.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Money IELTS
        • To make matters worse, governments in poor countries may misuse the money they are given because they do not have the resources or the know-how to tackle the causes of poverty.
        • Therefore, there is a risk that the money will not go to the people who need it most. 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Hands-on support is long-term solutions to sustainable development
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Even if financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of science, law and medicine in order to encourage their development (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: practical assistance and advice are indispensable for further advancement)
        • Scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, and professional and systematic education and training programs are therefore more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "SPEND" TIẾNG ANH
        • Technology transferring and labour force training have long-lasting effects on developing countries’ economy, shortening the gap between the first-world countries and the second-world ones.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  , Which rút gọn thành , Ving trong mệnh đề quan hệ
      • Example: 

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