Phân tích "Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý
    • Body 1: On the other hand, viết về ý số 1”universities are important”
      • Main idea 1: University education is essential for those who want to achieve success in an academic career
        • Supporting idea: In some highly skilled professions, knowledge at academic institutions is a prerequisite
        • Example: It is not possible to achieve success as a doctor without a university degree  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Take the case of doctors, for instance, the continuous diagnosis and practice cannot compensate for years of rigorous training at a medical school)
      • Main idea 2: Students can acquire qualities which are of paramount importance for their life success at universities
        • Supporting idea: y completing assignments and projects within a time budget, students can learn to plan and prioritize, which sharpens their time-management skills. 
    • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về ý số 2”the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution”
      • Main idea 1: individuals cannot succeed with academic qualifications alone>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • People need to sharpen their skill sets in the real working environment.
          • As theories from textbooks are generally outdated, one needs to expose themselves to various real-life situations at the workplace; otherwise, they will fail to meet their job requirements. 
        • Example: some talented individuals still manage to achieve success without any degrees. In the case of Bill Gates, a successful billionaire who quitted his program at Harvard, a prestigious university, it is his passion and diligence which drove him to the fame and fortune he deserves.
      • Main idea 2:  Entrepreneurial qualities, including risk-taking, creativity, and the ability to identify opportunities, are often honed through practical experience and not necessarily taught in academic settings.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Entrepreneurship involves taking calculated risks, which are best learned through real-world experiences where individuals must make decisions with tangible consequences. 
          • Academic environments may not adequately replicate the complexities of risk-taking in business ventures.

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