Phân tích "The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries." IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

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  • Overall:
    • The proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. 
    • Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.
  • Body 1: Viết về USA + Sweden 
    • Viết về USA
      • At the start, America saw 9% of people aged 65 or more. The rate rose gradually over the next 40 years, reaching just under 15% in 1980 before a 40-year period of approximate stability. It is then predicted to ascend suddenly to finish at 23%. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "gradually"
    • Viết về Sweden
      • For Sweden, it starts slightly lower at 5%, yet its rate of the elderly then experiences an exponential rise, finishing at 25%, only 2% lower than Japan.
  • Body 2: Viết về Japan
    • Except for the last few years, the percentages of senior citizens in this nation remained smaller than the others, beginning at 5% and remained below this level until the early 2002s. 
    • After that, it started to increase dramatically, and, by 2040, is predicted to overtake both Sweden and the USA to reach 27%, the highest figure of all. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "overtake" 

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